Fire
In my hand
I don't know what to do with this responsibility
I hid the fact for a while
But I'm sure they smell the smoke
Not sure if they’ve yet seen the Light
Sometimes I unconsciously show them
But they still can not see
They are blind to the fact
I can keep hiding
for now
I like this poem because it gives a fair insight to the fact that secrets are hard to keep. The words you used, such as Light(for the title) and then use fire and smoke were really good choices since in a way these three words revolve around each other. I think overall its a really fine piece.
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