Monday, October 17, 2011

Black Grass(Revision) - Black Heart(Colorless)


 

The grass is green

It’s a comfy place to lay
But my head hurts

As I squint my brown and red eyes I see faint hints of blue and white

I guess it’s the sky

As I roll over I see my shirt covered with burgundy

I guess it’s dried blood

Where am I?

All these colors surround me
I’m lost

Dried tears still linger on my face

I can still feel my heart but don’t get the same feeling these colors give me

It must be black




2 comments:

  1. Very imagery, i thought you are dying is that whats happening? It gives like a nice feeling, like what happened, leaves you clueless, greatjobbbb. a different approach from other poems ive read.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Very descriptive - painted a detailed picture. Creative!

    ReplyDelete