Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Bird Man(Revised)



On an average day

I wake up before the sun does
get dressed
and head out

There usually aren’t people around this early
So I feel at ease

But today is different.

I wake up after the sunrise and hear a whistling sound.

I could go a whole morning without being noticed
But today

There’s a bird in my window.

My window is usually closed but since plans have changed I change this one.

I open it up. and let him in

I feed him
and he flies away

There are 2 birds in my window
I let ‘em in. feed ‘em. and they fly away

There are 3 birds in my window
I let them in. feed ‘em. and they fly away.

The next day

I wake up early.
My window open.

There are no birds in my window.

I take a walk outside.

There are 3 birds in a branch
6 in a tree

2 on a lamppost
4 on the street

They follow me wherever I go

A huge smile on my face, they provide a bravado in which I use to start this day

I walk with more confidence now
My head higher and my chest broader

I feel good

Brand new

I feel included
like a part of something, so natural

I feel higher

Like a bird

4 comments:

  1. This poem is so unpredictable. I really enjoyed reading it :)

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  2. "Brand new
    I feel included
    like a part of something, so natural
    I feel higher
    Like a bird"

    I like how the belonging to something (nature) allows the poem to become stronger and higher, by association with the birds. Very Good natural poem.

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  3. I enjoyed this poem felt it had a very passive aggressive undertone with the idea that it could be about drugs or a user. Prob. Very extreme from what the poem is truly about but a possibility due to your great word play.

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  4. I agree with taylor, Great Natural poem.

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