Monday, September 26, 2011

Black Grass


The grass is green
The sea is blue
The clouds are white
Oranges are orange
Trees are brown
Plums are purple
Cranberries are red
Canaries are yellow

My heart is black
and cold
and bloodless
and dark

All these colors
All these things

I only see black.

2 comments:

  1. Interesting Poem. Very vague and yet very direct with the line "I only see is black". This could mean so much then what is simply written. Good job.

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  2. I PERSONALLY AM A VERY BIG FAN OF DARK POETRY. THIS POEM STARTS OUT VERY JOLLY AND BRIGHT AND TURN DARK. I LIKE HOW YOU THOUGHT ABOUT THIS CONCEPT. GREAT JOB. KEEP IT UP. ONE SUGGESTION IS TO MAKE A MORE DESCRIPTIVE

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