I hate this poem.
I haven't even finished writing it yet.
I know it'll be read and I'll have to do a revision.
I hate revising my expressions.
It makes my poems pointless.
I hate life.
I nolonger enjoy living.
Something that was once a challenging adventure
is now elongated, torturous test.
I wanna quit but suicide is overrated.
I hate killing myself and thinking of ways to do it.
I hate school.
At first you go to learn nut then they promote money and a degree.
I don't need a degree to be smart.
Why insult my intelligence?
It stresses me out to the point where I hate life.
School is ironically stupid.
I makes me wanna drink during a week day and come to class with a hangover.
I hate hangovers.
I hate myself. I hate the people reading this poem.
I hate because I don't wanna quit.
I hate quitting.
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ReplyDeleteLMAO I loved this. Truly unique in every way possible. Some of these quotes like "I wanna quit but suicide is overrated." are extremely poetic and likable. I totally could just picture myself as saying these types of things sometimes, and I can totally see them as awesome facebook status's. haha You caught every emotion about hating pretty much every damn thing around you. This was my favorite from any poem I've read so far in this class.
ReplyDeleteGood usage of the repetitive theme, I kind of wish you would elaborate more on why you hate hangovers, and us as the readers. It would bring more depth to the poem.
ReplyDeleteOther then that, thank you for sharing your personal thoughts in this poem.
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ReplyDeleteI like the irony you pose in the beginning by stating you hate the poem before you even finish it, then on going to state at the end that you hate quitting. You repeat that by saying you no longer enjoy living, but hate contemplating suicide. perhaps try to pick a side and elaborate more on that. also explain why you hate the people reading this poem
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